Monday, August 16, 2010

Apart....

"I Don't know what happens 
whenever i see or hear form your side
I feel so weak from inside...
I feel like getting on my knees
N Ask WHAT WENT WRONG ......??
Where did all the feelings Went by.....
The LOVE, the care we shared all passed by..


The Moments the feelings we shared together  still makes me smile..
The bitterness of our separation still bores a hole in my  head..
I don't want you to Turn Back,,
I don't want you to give it a new start..
Its just that i want you to lend me your hand
To help me to get out of here 
Help me to be so strong that one Day i let u go n never turn back......!!!! "



12 comments:

  1. This was really good although it was a bit difficult for me to understand as I am not good with poems... I am sure ki achi hi hogi

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  2. matlab aur kuch kaam nahi hai tujhe :P :P...
    theeekithaak hai chudail :)...
    nice one...
    keep it up...mwaaaaah

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  3. Awesome Poem Dear...!!!!! But Why So senti???

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  4. tu theek to hai? itni senti ? neway the poem is gud ! Bt m sure tu isse acha likh sakti hai ..great work though !!

    -Amit Mohanty

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  5. hey shruti nice poem ..keep it up!!!

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  6. janeman bht achi poem hai.. luv u.. aise hi likhti rehna..

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  7. cute girl with poems like these makes a complete package!!

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  8. ooh !!! the girl is sensitive !!!

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  9. Quite a sensible poem indeed !!!
    :)
    Nice expressive poem !!!
    Keep it up !!
    :)

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  10. Nice one.....
    Certain things cannot be captured in words. But you did a very nice job.

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