I fell in Love at first site
The first moment i held wide open my eyes
She was nobody else but my Mom
wearing an aprin and a Crown....
Giving her sleepless nights was the first thing i did..
Never letting her rest was the best thing i could gift ..
Then when she was not around i use to cry like hell ...
" COME TO ME COME TO ME " aloud i use to yell
Sitting in her lap f i use to feel safe and sound
Pissing in her lap filled me with proud....
Walking hand in hand was our first combined mission
Sleeping in her arms was the best thing that happened..
Sharing every bit of my life gives me immense strength
She is my mom my best mate and the best thing on earth that happened. .
By this Poem MY MUM i just want u to know
U are the worlds best creation and that everybody knows.....
Really very nicely composed one !!
ReplyDeleteOne f the best way to gve a Tribute to ur loved ones !!!
:) :)
Grt job...
emotions expressed in the purest possible way.. as fresh n refreshing as d morning dew....
ReplyDeletesuperbly superb...:)nice work dear..!!!
its hard to fill a stone with emotions and you did it very precisely......
ReplyDeleteWOW YAR !! ITZ SOOOOOOOO SWEET.......
ReplyDeletei loved it!!
ReplyDeleteu reminded me my childhood days.. n d pic u had put is shoooooooo sweeeet....luv my mum n every mum.... u r d talentd version of my frndship....Prakhar
ReplyDeletetooo pure...!! :')
ReplyDeleteits one of those which i say "direct from heart".
the simplicity in the words is stunning shrutzz.... i luv this one..!! :)
thanku people.. :)
ReplyDeleteyou r a nice poet gal.......keep it up......
ReplyDeleteHmmm... Pretty OK... It would be better if you could finish your follow up lines with an equal amount of length as the first one. The length timing isn't matching with the consecutive lines
ReplyDeletewill keep that in mind in future..... Thanx newaz.. :) m glad u mention the "MISSING THING."
ReplyDeleteThats good!! it is really really good!!! Great to have a poet around in the class!!!
ReplyDeleteThats good!! it is really really good!!! Great to have a poet around in the class!!!
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