Saturday, February 6, 2010

My First Date..

The ambience was generous , The view was awesome...
We  both were together Letting the moment blossom.
Shyness of the gestures and those hidden smiles..
Made it more special, made it more alive..
Sitting across the coffee,Chatting for a while..
Speaking our heart out and smyling all the time..
The glow on the face spoke the hidden joy..
The glass wall the unspaced aisle 
It was very cute very nice...

The way he sat on his knee..
Trying to speak his love out , putting in all the philosphy..
The thing he cudnt realise the more siimple he was the more he was nice..
The honesty the feeling was never more evident..
The bonding then ,was never more prominent..
Giving the attender at "nirulas" the extra tip..
Giving that coffee the last sip..
Walking hand in hand going that extra mile..
Bidding each other good bye with that melting  smile...


The best of that time couldnt be picked.
That dimpled smile was all over my head..
The day, The feeling couldnt be strolled back..
The way i feeled that day couldnt  be put in words..
Go feel for your self ,Coz for me it was awesome to be in LOVE.......!!!!


24 comments:

  1. nice it reminded me of mine...very beutiful desription...to the last detail...great penning!!!

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  2. i just felt it while reading..! :-)
    A.W.E.S.O.M.E

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  3. it is a reminder of my first date with an apt feelings
    lovely

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  4. Simply amazing.. u have bcum my inspiration.. each n every wrd touches..

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  5. OMG!!!! amazing..!! awesome..!! simply wow..!!!

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  6. hey swthrt, its awesum in every mausam....very fresh n touchy...i wish i could write like u....keep it up..i realy feel very nyc abt u.....Prakhar

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  7. OMG!!!!
    you made me speechless...
    after reading i simply say mind blowing piece of art..
    yr with all this you r creating an ambience of love around me
    aur ab i wish ki i will also fall in love
    thanxs,
    wish you write like dis in coming days

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  8. AWESOME...simply awesome..hey u really know hw to ryme... the best thing is...u know wat can b ur alternative carrier option ;-)

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  9. wooooooowwwwww..........
    gal u r just awsum......
    i think u defintely belong to dat elite genre...:) keep up the superb wrk...

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  10. shruti...inking down the feelings in words seems to be a good cup of tea for your's....
    predilection enough to arouse the feelings of the first date.....

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  11. wuld hv done smtin more :-p
    newaz its very sweet........lvin it

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  12. artistic in every manner.... no words..nice talent.

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  13. its jus the way it happened.. :)

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  14. perfectly perfect...
    took me back...!!
    luv the simplicity in ur work shrutzz :) :)

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  16. yaar chimpu..
    this is awesome..
    hw beautifully in simple words u hav said so many things..
    way 2 go..
    hats off 2 u..
    keep goin..

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  17. Its so b'ful... feels like fallin in love again.. its what every gal dreams n wants.. n all said in such simple words.. u bringing the fantasy of evry gal come alive wth those words... splendid, exotic, enchanting... trust me gal im out of words...

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